Friday, 12 October 2012

Treatment Final Draft


Treatment

Act 1:

It is the first day of school and Bobbi is new to Bermondsey Academy. Professor Geller calls a girl called Amie to show Bobbi around the school and how things work there. Amie and Bobbi start to bond really well and decide to have lunch together when all of the sudden she starts rubbing her belly, not noticing what she is doing. Amie notices and makes a joke asking if she’s pregnant but Bobbi doesn’t laugh. Amie suddenly realises that she actually is pregnant from the awkward silence.  She promises to keep it a secret between them. However a boy in the lunch hall that goes to the school over hears it and tells his girlfriend Kelly that goes to the same class as Bobbi and she wants to stir things up with the ‘new girl’.

Act 2:

Bobbi and Amie are sitting outside in the playground on a bench talking about their summer when all of a sudden Kelly takes the mick out of Bobbi. Bobbi realises what Kelly is taking the mick about. Bobbi gets really mad, the now really angry Bobbi walks over and raises her arm to slap her but Kelly stops her hand and pushes her to the ground. Bobbi lies on the ground screaming in agony while rubbing her belly and Amie runs over to help her up but she can’t as she grunts in pain. Amie calls a teacher to get an ambulance as blood trickles from under Bobbi’s skirt. Bobbi’s secret is out.

Act 3:

Bobbi gets in an ambulance as the rest of the school has come out to the playground to watch on as they have all heard that the ‘new girl’ is pregnant and had a fight with the ‘popular’ Kelly. Bobbi is worried for her baby. They rush to hospital, as the baby is in critical condition. The doctor and paramedics decide together that it’s best to put her in a special ward as they think they are going to have to deliver the baby early. She is lying in the hospital bed when Dr. Mosby comes in and tells her that she has lost the baby. She screams then starts to sob silently to herself. Amie comes in and hears the news and comforts her staying by her side. Amie questions Bobbi about the father but Bobbi remains silent as tears run down her face. Amie lies with Bobbi in her arms while she cries. Credits then start.

 

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