Wednesday 10 October 2012

Treatment draft one


Treatment

Act 1:

It’s the first day of school and Bobbi is new to Bermondsey academy. A teacher gets a girl called Amie to show Bobbi around the school and how the things work there. Amie and Bobbi bond really well and decide to have lunch together when all of the sudden she starts rubbing her belly, not noticing what she’s doing when Amie makes a joke asking if she’s pregnant but Bobbi doesn’t laugh and Amie realises that she really is and she promises to keep this a secret. However a boy that goes to the school over hears it and tells his girlfriend Kelly that goes to the same class as Bobbi and she wants to stir things up.

Act 2:

Bobbi and Amie are sitting outside in the playground on a bench talking about their summer when all of a sudden Kelly takes the mick out of Bobbi. This gets Bobbi really mad and angry and Bobbi walks over and raises her arm to slap her but Kelly stops her hand and pushes her to the ground. Bobbi lays on the ground moaning in pain while rubbing her belly and Amie runs over to help her up but she can’t as she grunts in pain. Amie calls a teacher to call an ambulance as blood trickles from under Bobbi’s skirt.

Act 3:

Bobbi gets in an ambulance and is worried for her baby. She’s lying in the hospital bed when a doctor comes in and tells her that she has lost the baby. She screams then starts to sob silently to herself. Amie comes in and hears the news and comforts her staying by her side. Amie questions Bobbi about the father but Bobbi remains silent as tears run down her face. Amie lies with Bobbi in her arms while she cries. Credits then start.

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